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First of all, the synopsis had me captivated. Grammar can be improved but it doesn't hinder the reading at all. The plot is intriguing and keeps you on your toes with curiosity about what happens next. Overall, great work Writer. Keep up the excellent work! Looking forward to the next chaps!

Fabulous story. I believe that the synopsis could be improved a bit as it isn't immersive enough to catch immediate attention. The story itself is well-written and portrays emotions pretty strongly. The grammar aspect could be worked upon. And the main character appears to be a person of strong will, based on the chaps I have read. Overall, the story is interesting and impressive. Looking forward to new chaps!!!

The plot building is out of this world. The emotions of Cas are so well portrayed that I felt as if it was me. Excellent work Author. Looking forward to more chaps from you!!!

Albeit the short synopsis, it captures my attention almost immediately. The flow of the story is stunning. The fast-paced story made me feel many emotions in just a few chapters. The wrong summoning, the difference in opinion, everything is so well-written. Looking forward to reading more chaps!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!

It has an intriguing plot as well as character depth. The emotions are portrayed impeccably. I especially liked the out-of-norm take on the sci-fi world. The story is sentimental, immersive, and overall highly well-written. Looking forward to new Chaps!

Just from the synopsis, I know that this novel will make me cry. The heartache in the first chapter and the immersive language author has used *chef's kiss* The only thing I would like to be improved is grammar. Keep up the good work.!!! Looking forward to new chaps!!!

An amazingly well-written story with a non-cliche plot and a refreshing take on normalized fantasy novels. Personally, I liked how determined the main character is. He knows what he wants to do and achieves it perfectly. The only thing that I felt could need improvement is the description. Although it fits perfectly, it feels a bit lengthy. Otherwise, fabulous job by the author. Keep it up!!!

The world-building is fabulous. I would like it if you start the first chapter in the middle of an action scene and then explain the background of the world. It would have more impact that way. The pacing and characters are admirable. I would like it if the pace picked up a little bit. Otherwise, fantastic job author!!!

The take on dual personality is both refreshing and amazing. The world plotting and depth are well-paced and maintained. Especially as the story progresses further, the plot unveils in a smooth yet satisfying way. Waiting for the new chapters. Worth the read!!!

The story has a lot of potential. First of all, I really loved the non-cliche take on the system novel. Although there are some similarities with Solo leveling, it isn't outright a copy of it. I loved how the author explained the situation and the MC's monologues are well-written. Recommended!!!