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I didn't know until now, I will use this movement in future chapters, thanks for the tip!

Sorry man, my vacation of the computer engineering ended a week ago, it's hard been that since tho. But I promisse that I will try to release atleast a chapter this week

Very great question, and before I answer I need to say, our conversation was very good, It's always good to talk to whoever is reading to catch up on your ideas. So, heres the answer: Spoiler* To start, I must say that it is difficult to make a new unique skill, since the author took shooting, a semi future prediction, ghost pass, dribbling, and a defender with insane physical talent. Akira is a player who has the potential to become the goat of basketball, so it is difficult to say that he has just one skill, he is the complete player, excellent in all aspects of basketball, but I will try to explain it better: His absolute speed is probably the first striking feature they noticed in Akira, having an abnormal starting power and maximum speed. The second point is the creation of impossible shots, being a constant danger for any marker, this also makes him a master of isolation. Akira's last "normal" characteristic is his basketball IQ, being of an extremely high level, probably his strongest attribute, which means he can't stand it when he sees a raw talent (This is what builds this coaching side from him) So, putting all this together, Akira has a sort of "Bestial Mode". In games that are very difficult, he isolates the court from the outside world inside his mind, concentrating all his focus on the game, he is able to read everyone's movements on the court. Combining an almost prediction of the future with thunderous speed, he becomes a monster on the court, scoring points in any way possible, dunking, shooting threes, fadeaways, stepbacks, the whole arsenal. This mode tires Akira a lot, not being able to keep it active for a long time, but while it is active, it is almost as if he is in a different pacing to everyone on the court, he becomes absolute.

yeees! I know that GOM means TEIKO, but what is GOM?

Hey! Of course I took it in stride, constructive criticism is always very welcome. I will answer your questions: Spoiler* I agree with you that I may have pushed the envelope a little in how quickly he became friends with Kazuya, especially, but in my mind, in middle school I made friends so spontaneous that I thought it was okay hahaha. He won't be a social butterfly who accepts everything, he's even quite "fighting" on the court. But this personality takes on more as he gets older. So, in my opinion, the protagonist really sees the team with a certain "coach" perspective, he sees talent and is passionate about seeing the potential of his teammates' talent, the scene with Renji's dribbling working was a spark of potential " maximum" of him, which was unexpected to happen so quickly. I've always liked those novels where the protagonist forms a kind of "army", strengthening those who are close to him but always being the strongest, and I try to apply that in this fic. Him being shy around girls is a boy thing, he is popular in the US as he played at the highest level of tournaments but he was only 12 years old at most, he didn't interact well with girls in the US either. In the last game I wrote, chapters 27-30 he played for keeps, ignoring teammates when he wanted. He is almost like a "king" on the court, very different from how he is off the court. You could say going more extreme that he likes to play with good people, so he's improving them for that. In this last game, for example, he scored 72 points, so coach Yamamoto had made a plan similar to the one he has in the blue lock to take turns who would be the protagonist on the court, but he himself notes that the plan went down the drain when Akira is on the court, because no one can highlight his talent and skills. He can block and he's very good at it, and he'll do it more often at the national level, when he's playing a more positional game.

And there's still one more to compete for the position... hahaha

Hey Achilles! Thank you very much for the review! I didn't quite understand the last part of the review, but let's answer point by point. I understand you about oc's, but when I started planning this novel, I thought to myself: I don't find any highschool in the knb interesting and I would like to start in middle school. However, I've seen fics here that had a middle school part and I analyzed, if the protagonist loses to Teiko in the end, I would really think it's a bad ending, losing to their prime form as everyone else. Otherwise if he only beat Teiko alone, there would be no point in having high school, since it would no longer be challenging since the generation of miracles would separate and in theory it would become "easier". At that moment, I thought of an idea that could be really cool, which would be if the protagonist hadn't beaten Teiko alone, but rather with a team that he helped improve, creating almost two generations of miracles simultaneously. And then, my plan is (if you don't want spoilers, don't read the line below): Everyone split up and begin the "true king of Japan" arc. Which would serve to separate the strong Oc's and follow the original work more, with more appearances. But this whole idea would only work if the oc's were well worked and everything. It was the solution I came up with for the work. Second point: optimistic Mc, I really dont like mc like Midoriya and Bell, but I dont like characters like Sasuke or Edgy characters to be the main character, so I float in somewhere in the middle of this. When Akira is challenged he can be mean, outside this situations he is more likely a chill and "fun" person. The age really matters and I try to take this into consideration when I'm writing the dialogues and stuff like that, for example, I dont really like the start arc of my fic because in my opinion the characters looks a lot older then it would supposed to be, but I overlook that since is less then 10 chapters; Weeeell, i think thats all. I hope I've responded to your well-placed criticisms, and really, my fic isn't that good for those who don't like oc's. But I'm very happy with your review! I will take everything into consideration by writing the next chapters. Thanks for the support!

lmao

This is in Japan, the kid phase is less than 10 chapters. The middleschool phase will last a loooot longer, three years that Akira will try to surpass Teiko. I know a lot of people doesnt like original characters, but in my novel, especially in middleschool, there will be a lot of original characters, including Nanami, the assistent of his team in middleschool. If you're not a fan of original characters I really wouldn't recommend my novel. But if you like it, I hope to see you in the next chapters!

Glad that you liked Streiz! Thanks for the support