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too short !

such editing with repetitive text

Chapter 17 got me hooked with this story for. life. Finally we have someone who understands that he is unstoppable and can act as he sees. I like that cannon is first taken than shredded to pieces and thrown away. hope mc will be the same with random strangers and continue showing that he is in fact a BOSS not some side char with need to consider strangers thoughts and reactions keep up the good work

Omg ! this is so epic and cool. I swear this chapter is the best one so far!

Silly Mc beating Kakashi is easier , just ask him to lose to you in spar and offer something in return. and it's done! silly mc always follow systems likes a puppets

I lost count of face-palms I had to do, to get through this chapter.

ugh... what catalyst what materials? how tf he synthesized a new metal? too abstract to be interesting so much lack of details lead me to believe that Tony is in fact harry potter with Hagrig next to him , saying single phrase over and over again :" It's magic , Harry! " . maybe it's only me , but I'm really dissappointed. I thought he will be real deal business man, but he turned out to be a kid playing in sand, choosing Japan, which is tiny plot of land compared to an entire world. No matter the world, strong heroes are only 1% or even less of the population, most of the people are those with useless quirk or without one, he could make so many money with them but focuses only on tiny % , also he could find so many good workers cos usually oppressed one try the best so quirk less would work their ass out for a chance of their lives. overall I don't really find characteristics of charismatic Tony , for one he is still a kid and will be a kid since otherwise how can author put him into the plot to be a pawn there , while he could very much be a player or at least a king . No matter what others think, Tony importance is not in the suit , but in his brain , suit ate just extra support

well one thing that is off is overpowered tag , that's not the case here , so not to mislead maybe change it to strong character since he is strong but actually overpowered characters can play baseball with his head

That me -_- reading about handsome and sexy face Gerald when I have read all the books on Witcher ( for people that don't know , witchers in fact are not sexy and beautiful but their body is stained with ugly scars, their bodies are very and very lean without extra pump or muscles they are quite dystropthic and ugly, since they are forced to starve all the time. In fact there is so little pay and so little monsters left in Witcher that sometimes they are not able to feed themselves at all and forced to find food in forest and survive like this for months and more) So yeah witchers are scary, unless u like men with scars all over the body almost without a single clean piece of flesh and who looks very lean and dystropthic.

Yeah, since ChatGPD got his reputation of doing everything for us we lost something important in fangics and novels. usually there were a lot of good pieces with deep characters and emotions , nowadays there is little. it's just sad how this change came to be so quickly, last year it was still good but now ..