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she is exactly 32 years old in konoha year 58
I don't know but I think they rhymed!
Author where are your previous chapters since I can only see 11 chapters. if you can re-upload them then that's great if not then can you just released a auxiliary chapter about all his powers, abilities and weapons like a status sheet.
Author I think you should do a rewrite with rudeus removed in a little plot point that seraph devoured his soul or something like that. My reasons for that are:- 1)-He is just uncomfortable to read with his perverted habits. 2)-Seraph would not be able to develop his powers and relationship with others as much as youd'd like. 3)-He is useless to the plot with his hesitation to kill in a world where hitogami exist, he is useless in magic research, useless if seraph would become powerful. 4)- This one is for comments I read saying not to remove him and make rudeus junior of seraph. This would literally make you loose a chance to explore more about magic like you can create so many spells that would eradicate the need of rudeus. For example- Teleporting Spell Better healing spells Exploring more fantasy magic elements like space, time, gravity, sound, etc. Charms in which seraph can embed his magic spells with. And honestly not many like the character of rudeus and his removal to the story would only be appreciated.
Thank you everyone for the support and I promise that the moment my exams are finished I will get straight to writing more chapters.
I'm trying for one chapter a day with 1000 words but one of the review givers, hacopo_YT requested for the chapters to be longer and to be honest that's hard to publish in one day. So Let's See~
Na~Ah~ Look again