a newer writer with a friend (who does most of the writing) trying to make a good novel. we are currently making a new book called cursed lands because we didn't like our old one and lost interest
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if MC's flaw is basically to find a master by only telling the truth and he still has a divine rank, could you imagine how powerful this girl 'should' be?I mean her eyesight is gone that is quite the flaw she got, she has to be near divine rank as well,
if they offered you a billion credits, buy mana stones and boom bunch of seeds 🤯🤯🤯
if his friend's family is middle class as well, what does mcs family own? do they own some kind of shop to stay afloat like this herb shop?
from what it sounds like their barely even middle class and yet can travel around the world as tourists?
see this is were I'd have pick a more humanoid appearance so I could go outside the dungeon hear their plans, mock them, or even do a speech. if they do something I dont like, bam dungeon break destroying the camp, killing people, anything I'd want.
i don't know about others but I'm more likely to follow someone with a mask than without.
this would be very op late game since it does 40% damage to health. tier 6 players would have 40% health gone for just 5 DP?
I'd just read it as motivation
I truly hope a female character wasn't introduced just for the main character to look at her "enormous melons"
with this I can only imagine assembly lines filled with zombies making wooden planks for weeks on end