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The first chapters are captivating and intriguing. However,as we dont know much about the character at the beginning of the book it is hard to sympathize with her but we do feel an attachment as the book progresses. A nicely written story with a good pace, recommended for anyone who enjoys that type of stories

I suppose he learned to do it while he was in the human world. We saw Lucifer change during his stay in LA in more ways than one. Lets just say that his ability to lie came from the many years of staying in LA.

*understood *complained

You are still talking about the past so: *took me,fed me,came etc or *would take me,feed me

*I(i is always used in its capital form) *couldn't(cant talks about the present)

A very interesting book with an original,well-constructed idea and a flow with a steady pace. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys reading novels about technology and games,with a hint of romance. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious

First of all,the author has a talent for description that in addition with the steady flow makes the book easy and enjoyable to read.A very good knowledge and usage of the english language. Overall,a good and promising read.

It has a nice flow but the plot is a bit inconsistent. The characters are likeable to the reader since they resemble everyday teenagers. Overall,it has a promising start and an intriguing plot.

I really liked it and added it to my collection. Normally,I dont enjoy system stories but this one was way more than a series of game characteristics. It had good structure,despite the grammatical errors,the flow was steady and continuous and it generally resembled a fantasy book with system trades rather than the opposite.

The book has a relaxing start and a good flow. The grammar is also good.The main protagonist is relatable,depending on your lifestyle. Overall,a nice work. Keep it up.