Poeta. Escritor. Educador Comunitario. (ANCED: 69957/16. España) Computación, Liderazgo y Gestión Empresarial. URP. Perú. Dirección de Proyectos. BID. EE. UU. E-Learning Instituto InterGlobal. EE.UU.
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It has poetic features. and philosophical. for a previous existence and for a life of natural coexistence
Excellent writing. Rich in nuances of language. At 6 chapters per month. That's 1.5 chapters per week. Likes the appropriation of the environment. From a family setting to a shared room. With common spaces: with interventions typical of two great friends. One is passionate, jovial, helpful, while long-suffering, amorous, playful. The other is serious. Scheduled. Deliberate bias in your shared space. Simulate good coexistence. Respect for women.
Enchantment and disenchantment. The pass of doing and letting do. Of respect and imposition. Of the portent of man and the right to coexist.
It is good writing: with a jovial description, in contrast to the real settings. It's perfect, for so much activity to write significant updates. Drive well: both worlds. He, of the "contemporary" protagonist and that of the "monarchist" game itself. He is a leader of his own family team. He knows how to bounce back from adversity and measure his and his co-stars' steps. Great wealth of scenarios. With vivid narratives.
Awesome! How lively, development. Delegating. Freeing. Slipping away.
The real environment is lived, as if it places the reader on the stage waiting to find the protagonist and keep him company. I'll have a drink and I'll go, then dance!
And the empire of the Raven?
Beautiful description. Master writing. Kudos to Kingdom Media editors. (like there is a medieval - contemporary mix)
What an interesting opportunity to discover the world at a party. Having passed a slip of life.
I like the introduction ending with individual reference, AND those full names. The prelude to the dialogue between sisters: with diplomatic purposes. Whose duty to attend events. And the right to choose a husband.