Lal_CrocusMist

Hello! I am very sorry if I am out of bounds for the last couple of months. I had a tough writer's block that it was hard to even come up with even just anything. I also felt discouraged of things that I lack interest of just about anything I usually do. I hope that you will remain patient and supportive like the usual. Thank you very much for the understanding and the unending love and warmth you offer me. Keep safe, and keep growing and creating!. My deepest regards!

thank you!🤗

no big deal🤗

just the usual errors.. typographical and such.

The descriptions are so vivid, I thought I am a part of the book. I like how you artistically use words for us to be teleported in a new dimension. Reading this makes me happy! a few errors but not noticeable enough to ruin the plot. Nicely done!

the book is very interesting. it has the romance that most people want. the energy the book gives and how you described the characters works its wonders. I just have a suggestion, pls refrain from being redundant. I know, we sometimes don't notice it but we eventually do it. like, try to not explain the infos you already gave. but story-wise, you have an interesting plot there.

it's fine.. you gave us enough insight with the prologue. it's a powerful start. more power😉

Intriguing! I like how you playfully wrote the chapters giving an insight into the beautiful romance to watch out for. but isn't too early for you to paywall the chapters? Well, the author knows what she's doing so I trust what surprises you have for us! Wish you all the best!

I like how realistic the book was written. The conversations are of in time and one would relate and would somehow connect the deeper you get into the book. Nicely done.

So there's something that's been bothering me after reading this, and its those little quirky objects or symbols you have. I don't know if it has something to do with the story but it sometimes catches my attention more than the plot making me a bit confused for a sec. And also I noticed the dialogues. You use the symbols on it too, and sometimes do not or with a different one on the next chapter. May I suggest that you stick to another symbol like how or what others use (") or just use your own preference, no matter what symbol it is just make it consistent. But story wise, it is an interesting book! the descriptions are so nice, I thought I am watching a movie, well for me and through my imagination of course, but it is so vivid and cute especially the science stuffs. I do not know if it is legit or mixed but it adds a sprinkle to the story. Keep it up! gonna put this inside my pocket for emergency reading purposes with mah other stuffs for future use. hehe