RulerOfKnowledge

A fanfic of The Legendary mechanic, how wonderful, and on top of that well written, the heavens blessed fanfic fans once again, despite having dropped the novel, I hope this experience is complementary because I liked the concept of the novel

Thanks for the chapter

I don't understand why this fanfic is being so criticized, its quality is unquestionable, both in writing and in the development of the world, it presents the worldview of divine creatures, their relationships and interactions (which so far I believe to be quite realistic), as well as the criticism, all I have to ask is if they know the concept of unreliable narrator.

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Brother, I didn't expect what I just read. It took me 2 days to get to the current chapters and let's just say that these 2 days were a lot of reflection. If there's something I liked and the density of the story, everyone is involved, using their brains and stuff. If I were to add, I would like to see a POV of Civilians or people who were caught by the skin of their teeth in this criminal underworld. And also, now another recommendation for the author, open a Patreon and post your work on other sites, from my research time webnovel is not a welcoming place for works with realistic themes, it is more for fantasies and leveling.

This is one of the qualities I value most in a fanfic, if I were to read the canon I would be reading the webtoon, so author just go crazy with the butterfly effects.

I can deny

Of course both, also a piece of advice, don't do flashback chapters, it totally destroys the immersion of the work, if you want to tell stories about characters, use dialogues between the characters and through information about the world, things like TV, telephones, etc., that's it. helps to build mystery and this mystery does not always need to be solved, one of the examples we have in lookism is the king of seoul.

I went in thinking it would be more of the norm, stressed teenager gets a system and now all the girls are chasing him, all the men hate him and he slaps everyone in the face, but no, here I found a more realistic approach to this type of reality, the protagonist having friends is one of those things, he is also someone who accepts reality, the protagonist is not just an edge lord, dense isekai protagonist, who sees everything and everyone as XP, he is a human, evolving and with flaws, which you see being corrected throughout the chapters, the secondary characters have lives, opinions, desires and dreams, not only used as plot devices, here you understand why this character did this, what motivated him to do it, Now talking about the underworld, he is as realistic as possible, in the fact that the world is not black and white but a good mix of gray. I think that's what I have to say for now, I'll leave it 4.2 stars because it still has room to grow.

One of the best things about this fanfic is the author's charismatic writing, it makes you really immersed in the story, along with the dialogues being able to express the emotion that the author wanted to express, it is still at the beginning, but any work with these characteristics has the potential to become a well-cut diamond, good work