Suicide_Maniac

It's quite good, an interesting concept using Yoruichi's powers in MHA world, definitely worth your attention at the very least. Writing quality is also pretty good so should definitely give it a try.

oh god...i can't even curse or comment will be deleted but **** ***

The law, Modern Ethics, Some Common Sense, Little bit of Rationality, Slight sense of Sympathy or a small amount of Humanity.

+1

this seems reasonable. +1

the same suggestion for your other MHA fic

Haven't read much but it looks interesting...as for why I am writing this review before reading much. the reason is simple–so damn less views! Now, I don't wanna sound like a smartarse but I think its just common sense. I don't know whether the author deliberately didn't do it or just didn't know. Would suggest a few things: 1. The Name—Change the name of book from "KFP" to "Hololive: Kiara Fried Phoenix" or at least something along those lines. the KFP just isn't helping in any case. 2. The Cover—using a picture of a bunch of holo-idols together or just using a fanart of Kiara would be much better than just having no cover pic. It adds more appeal and people(i) usually don't click on books without a cover. All that out of the way, I love the concept and looking forward to your work.