Hollowed_6791

starkiller style

she took a while to come into her badass arc, before that she was an abused housewife

Honestly wasn’t expecting to like it this much, I do genuinely appreciate the pre war start and the main character in general, he’s intelligent enough without feeling like a Gary Su, his system is sufficiently powerful and it seems the author put a lot of thought into it. I’m a sucker for a villain main character and although I’d hardly call him a villain (more an anti hero) he’s still got that willingness to do things for selfish reasons while not being a complete scumbag. The underwater vault arc currently going on as I write this is easily the best part in my opinion, I don’t see it mentioned much and tying that in with how similar it is to bioshock without just adding in an entirely non compatible universe but taking references and parts from it is really well done in my opinion. Overall easily 9/10 fallout fanfic can’t wait for more feed me more

Damn caught up thanks for posting this I read it all in like half a day I’m heavily invested

I like how this is a subtle show that implies Shane already considers Michael to be a figure of authority outside of the “rest of the group” when he lets him walk past

Thanks for writing this I’m heavily invested in it.

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World hopping novels are a difficult genre to get right, I absolutely love the world-building and the characters. Especially the main character, he still cares for his friends and their well-being and future. My only gripes with the novel are that the system seems needlessly complicated in parts and the second issue isn't with the story itself but the fact that webnovel split chapters up into multiple.

And apparently, you don't do sarcasm either.