Chaoscaller

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Uhhh... You do know how fishy that sounds, right?

How do you mean?

Most excellent! Can't wait to read your review!

Not a bad start to a story. Nice description, most generous use of dialogue and nice length of chapters. However, I have a slight remakr/critique, if I may. Your writing style is a bit... All over the place. For example, not using the capital form 'I' when reffering to self. Also missing capital letters at the beginning of sentences in dialogue. It reminds me of.... Well, me --A couple of years ago. I cannot say anything about stability of updates, since there only have been two chapters as of right now. However, very solid and good story, I know you can do it!

Mixed vibes in what way? Good and bad vibes or...?

Oh, I am working on that. No worries.

While I do see where you are coming from, Julian just isn't the type to be humourous. Due to his psyche, he isn't a jokester. Instead, he is a cold calculating individual shaped by some evens in his life.

Excellent, I am glad I could help you! May I ask for your input on my story as well?

It's not really necessary to mention that. Both characters know what the currency is, and saying otherwise would be expositional dialogue