Gold_Phoenix777

The translation is very well done. The story tired me out from the second world onwards. I don't know if it's just this MC or evil MCs in general, but the villainous act got to me pretty quickly.

Sonido is better

Great story. I read it a second time, although I dropped it halfway through the first one because there weren't that many chapters yet. You really excelled with this story, author. The MC has a unique personality, different from the classic protagonists. The story's development was also well done. If I had to criticize anything, it would be that throughout the story, the extent of the MC's abilities isn't very clear. For example, in Danmachi, it seems that he seals his regeneration ability, which makes him appear weaker or get hurt more often. He's fainted after winning several fights, but it's not clear if he's pretending to be weak or if it's truly the limit of his powers. I'm not trying to discredit the story, and what I mentioned is a minor detail; the story is incredible. I also liked the twist you gave to the personalities of some characters; they blended well into the story.

Solo Leveling?

The story was going well until you introduced the world of Douluo Dalu, from there I lost all interest. I know it was in the synopsis but I was hoping it would be short but there are too many chapters dedicated to cultivation and it bored me. Also, in my opinion, you extended his stay in Harry Potter too much, in his second year he had already fulfilled all the objectives of that world, the rest were practically filler chapters, except for the fourth year.

That's my phrase haha