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"In a way, yes, I was Yun Er, your mother. Ming had this system module installed in him (HER) before he (SHE) was born, but he (SHE) used it only when he (SHE) felt it necessary because he (SHE) [felt like it did not suit him (HER) at all] (didn't like it)." pronoun change - () makes more sense

yeah, i liked this - and based on what's there so far, if i had bought an amazon book of this, i would not be unhappy. My only criticism is possibly i would have wanted more detail on his early survival sort of chapter 25 - 30 ish - and yeah a few hundred more chapters ... its promising so far