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I love how the author described the characters, the bacKground and the story in general. i love how it has hints Comedy i like to see that. if your into these type of storys i highly recommend

I love how the author describes and have into the details of the characters, background and the story in general. If you are into these type of story’s I highly recommend this one

I love how the author made this! With the diary and the thoughts that the charcter is going through and everything else. the sypnosis is also catchy it could grab readers making people want to read this “diary”. all i could say at the end is that this could improve a little bit but i beleive this will make a Hit! Good luck!

I love how in the sypnosis you can see In mind where this story can lead and it leaves you imagining what could happen next which brings you into this story i find interesting. i love how you add a little but of romance and action/humor combined in it as well. keep it up!

When i first read the sypnosis i knew this story was going to be interesting. I love how you Described Your characters with a strong lead and the cover if the story. Its really interesting, i recommend it. good job

As you continue readingthe story, you will see some information and background from where the Characters came from and why they are they way they are today, but ill keep in mind about the chapters length. Thank you for the Advice!

I have to say just by reading the first chapter you can tell author seems dedicated to what he is doing and adding enough details as he can to the story and i really like that. Even though there were some words i didnt know i still find the story interesting, keep it up! :)

Overall right when i read the sypnosis i knew that this was going to be interesting, i love how you add a little hint if humor from time to time, i also lovee everything about the princess. I enjoyed reading, i cant wait to see more :)

The development, the description if the characters, and the background Of Everyone and everything thats going is On point! If i was to be honest i didnt think this was going to intrest me as i thought it would but the first chapter got me hooked, keep it going!

To me I like how in the beginning, the story made me want to question what is going on and makes me feel as if i want to know more (I think that’s a good thing) The characters are also interesting and how you described them. But so far it looks really good :)