FadeKnight

A fantastic story. And actually entertaining leave on journey to becoming superman. if there was one thing, the story got right, it is Superman special brand of heroism doing the right thing even if it’s hard. There are some weird things to though mainly the terraforming of Mars. Does Jon Jones not exist here anyway, here is five stars to keep you going.

Why did i only just discover this story now? A great story.

Thank you so much for this experience. It was wonderful. I am looking forward to whatever you do next.

Ahahahahahahah

Every time this story updates I get heart flutters. I should see a doctor. Thanks for the chapter.

Tanks

Tanks.

Everyone is still hurting. Thanks for the chapter.

A small spew of flowing sand to tip the scales. Diabolical. I like both the spell created and the way it is going to be used. You outdid yourslef here.