vinthakadha
i am a budding writer who wants to explore genres and plots that others have not used. having said that i also like to keep my stories simple. i like to tell stories from the view point of a layman.
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vinthakadha2 years ago回復 dozkiller07thanks for the comment
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
i have one suggestion. please avoid repeating the last lines of the previous chapter. those who read the previous chapter would know how it ended anyway. you could start with an ellipsis instead.
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
yaksha prashna!!!!
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
shabdabhedi!! an extremely hard skill that puts an archer leagues above others!!!!
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
i fell for the misleading title of this chapter!!!! worth learning!!!
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
putting a reluctant child in danger deliberately is cruelty. even if it is a royal child. let us see what happens next.
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
A good start to the story. the extremist view of only one side is right and the other side is wrong and there cannot be a an alternate reality is a concept that has been the cause of many wars resulting in bloodshed, destruction of life and property. yet, it continues to serve as a strong plot for an equally strong story. i hope this story provides as good a plot as i expect it to.
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
nice !
- vinthakadha2 years ago發表
wasn't it Brighu and not Venugopal?
