Stieborn

I love this Arlecchino's way of thinking🤣🤣

ah it suddenly turned into first person pov

*what am I doing

The story progression and lore is quite good. My only problem is the writing quality, there are too many punctuation marks on a single sentence, some of the grammar is wrong and even a few sentences lack words for readers to understand. Hopefully the author updates or edits the writing quality in the earlier chapters.

*man in black

*were happening

there are quite a lot of punctuation marks that are not needed

*would like

*kill it yet

*cute laugh