RiverGoat

"It's been quite a journey, but after a lot of rewriting, I'm excited to share one thing with you. I've rewritten this book and given it a new title: 'Second Act: My New Life With a System.' If you're interested, I'd love for you to take a read and let me know what you think. Your feedback means a lot to me."

Yeah, that's the thing, he was just too naive. Nice to see someone picking up on that. Indeed, it was a self-inflicted tragedy.

Hey, appreciate the feedback! About what you mentioned, I'm gonna stick with those dashes—I've had them in my toolkit for a while now. Hope it grows on you. Big thanks for the input. If there's anything else you reckon could use a tweak, drop it my way. Always up for refining the craft. Cheers! 📝✌️

So, is that an invite? Interesting.

I brought him up earlier in this chapter. He's one of Gavin's lackeys.

Hey, thanks a bunch for the feedback! I totally get that the style might not be everyone's cup of tea, but it's the kind of writing I vibe with and feel comfortable in. Still, I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

Big thanks for the golden ticket, WesternGod! It totally made my day. Appreciate it a ton!

Poor Richard

I'd like to express my heartfelt gratitude to all of you who have generously supported me with your power stone. A special thanks to Gabriel_Henrique_8729, who has been supporting me since the beginning. Also, I'd like to thank Nicholas_Wygle for the three power stones and jotape_do_morro for one power stone. I hope y'all keep supporting me

This chapter was truly challenging to write, as I had to put one of my beloved characters through the wringer. Yet, I couldn't help but enjoy every moment of it, exploring a style I'm not used. Hope y'all liked it as much as I did.