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And so the plot thickens.

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Good story, I like what I have seen so far. I'm excited about what will be happening when he starts expanding and more of the world and the grander story is revealed. Grammar is also improving steadily. In the first chapters, there were words missing or larger errors, now there is much less of such things, and the story flows better. I'm heartened to see the author steadily improving in quality. Good job!

Let it all burn

How do the cultivators say it? "cut the weeds and pull out the roots"? sounds right

Cornbringer does it again with a new literary contribution. good stuff ..................................................................

I hope you are feeling better from whatever it was.

Good stuff author! I love that you are diving into sect building and I hope that it will be a focus from now on. It's rare to see a sect founding novel and I think this is a great start! keep up the awesome story!