Mr_Sir_Man

this is not normal american. crime is growing like hell. I will try to show that in the story with more detail next time so there is no confusion.

why? tell me so i can fix.

1000 words

Tell me my mistakes I will not fix now but in future maybe.

Uneventful chapter. Just tired I will get a longer chapter next time. Thank you

i don't know if you noticed i am increasing the word count and i plan to make the chapters longer but i need time to getting used to writing

why am I doing this?

Should I write how I did in the first 3 chapter or was this chapter better