Daoisto408Vc

This has been nothing short of exemplary. The pacing is incredible, the dialog feels realistic, the characters are flushed out, the names are appropriate for the setting (No Bob Uchihas here), and there are no repetitions of ideals or beliefs (If there is, it’s so natural that you don't even notice it). Most importantly, there are no grammar issues; no misspellings, proper punctuation, and correct labeling (Chakra is not qi, ninjas are not mages, justsus are not spells, etc). This is everything a proper Naruto fanfic should be.

Brilliant 👏

It was an enjoyable journey, and I hope to see fics more like this

Great Grammer Good Story Progression There is not a lot of world background provided

It's one piece I wouldn't be surprised

He has dark hair

Take care

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