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good book, lousy ending. it was opened up for a whole new war in the main universe full of violence conquest and destruction as hx finds another civilization posed to attach earth, and the subsequent subjugation of the entire main universe by hx and the three univerval civilizations.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

paragraph 8 you switched peter with quinn in the last sentence or 2

decription of blood swipe instead of form it should be from

second paragraph difiantly should be definitely