Shibou_Kurai

"We'll be together forever" is normally said before shit happens...

1-5-3-3-3. Well, normally I don't post reviews, but here I am... The idea and the theme is really interesting, but the write quality is really bad, if you don't know how to speak english just write on your language and use some app (like ChatGPT) to translate, I really recommend you rewrite the chapters, because is kinda impossible to read. Good luck on your work!

Really interesting story... I like it [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

I'll balance this... Each bad review without a good reason, I'll give another 5 stars. If u want review, say what I didn't like and how to improve, that's the basic. And say I don't like it, cuz it's BL. I don't like a lot of things and don't go on every fanfic disliking it.

Just take a look on my last comment.

Idk how advanced are you in chapters, but I would love see, when Soren talk about his cat life. I think too, Soren should tell Clark about his power, Soren need believe more on Clark. Thank you for this amazing chapters in a row!

I think u can delete it, or something else.

Go find a pussy to fuck and don't waste your time trash talking others. U should waste ur time in this shit game MLBB, full of kids like u

Do you have a schedule? Can u send it?

Good story, I like it! [img=Feeling it] However, I almost always like BL story. [img=Smitten] I'll be waiting more chaps. [img=More pls] And please don't worry about the others saying about your fanfic... Here always have toxic people. [img=Your move]