Stillness_Of_Death

Super Gene Immortal It's a rare good Super Gene fanfic

I couldn't read past chapter 11 because it was too cringe for me although the writing quality was coherent and cohesive the author is mixing so many worlds right from the start I'm unsure of the plot

So Sukuna from jujutsu kaisen and Madara Uchiha from Naruto combination

I want to start with saying that I've been a fan of your wyvern fic and want to know when you will continue it. It was one of the best Dxd fic for me. As for this fic, the start was good but it went downhill after the bael heir plot at least for me. The harem is too big and for me it didn't work out too many OCs and the harem members character were a bit off though the romance part was not bad but not good either. But the main thing that I didn't like was the power concept of MC. Despite having power of gravity from demon lord Wilbert from testement sister new devil which is equal or stronger than power of destruction it was nearly invisible throughout the fic apart from the start where he used it to train. Soul magic, necromancy , mage, knight alchemist blacksmith etc. you have put a lot of eggs in one basket and instead of harmony it all looks chaotic . Summary: For the author, you have a lot of ambitions you should have taken one step at time for all those professions and even that harem to work out not just take the shortcut called timeskip overall the concept of the fic was good but the execution was poor.

Why just why go steal someone else's work?? Go read this read at genesis translations and support the translators there who are working hard

Go read this at genesis translations and support the translators there and this novel is not finished and was on hiatus and I think two days ago he was back.

For some reason, this seems familiar. I think I've read it in fanfiction.net and that was dropped a long time ago. But I forgot the name of the author. Anyway I can basically state that Riser will lose the rating match and will have conflict with his parents and will exchange the mutation bishop piece for Clarissa from his mother. If this story is from fanfiction.net

The plot is intriguing despite being clique. And the is the system inspired from Fated Villain novel? I think the protagonist name was Gu Changge or something. If it is I hope the author can continue this

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I didn't read all the chapters but this story kind of gives me Author's POV vibes........................................................Can anyone confirm???