Limpin_Technocat
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Limpin_Technocat3 years ago回復 That_Guy68yes it will have dragons the story's actually centered around them :D
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- Limpin_Technocat4 years ago發表
Two words for this novel: WASTED POTENTIAL. The whole concept of bonding with monsters is absolute gold, but reading on I feel utter disappointment. The grammar is horrendous, the plot is weak, the mc is beta and the entire story is just a shadow of what it could be. I'm not a troll I'm just commenting on what I see
- Limpin_Technocat4 years ago發表
Excellent work on this novel! From the very first chapter was completely immersed in the well thought out storyline. The characters were described very well along with the world surrounding them. Just wondrous!!
- Limpin_Technocat4 years ago發表
As a gamer by heart this story is wondrous for those like me. The plot feels well thought out and the author made sure that the first chapter was 100% on point to capture readers and you aced it! Great work!!
- Limpin_Technocat4 years ago發表
Not a lot to go on with there only being one chapter and all. But I see potential, I mean the secret agent thing seems like a good plot to go along with With proper writing this will go pretty well.
- Limpin_Technocat4 years ago發表
I find myself genuinely vibing with this novel. The plot of revenge was brought out through the entire story and doesn't deviate in the slightest. Everything was fleshed out properly and feels a bit refreshing due to its uniqueness. Great work author!!
- Limpin_Technocat4 years ago發表
Story seems to be well thought out. I can tell that the author put everything into this work. The story goes along smoothly as it subtly immerses the reader in the plot. Well done author!!
