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Well you are right but you can take some inspiration and at least change the powers of the protagonist a little bit like in can only copy abilities of monster at least it would it be mor convincing to read and vampire and werewolf as principal race in an fantasy world what is this twilight dude come on.

Being honest the ability doesn't convince me in the beginning but in the end don't sound to bad but the world of this series in the beginning sound to bad structured I guess you can make some changes like is a academy on a magic world plot like most of manwhas and place some of fantasy games like dungeons and dragons, magic , etc and something like wow like two factions fighting for the dominion and etc I guess that the ability should be mor like re monster just a few abilities and maybe with something like monster too and at least keep the ability to mix up with the new ones for example having the strength of the and and the ability of a fly and the regeneration of the toad but at least that it has to be used with monster like giant ant and demonic fly something like that I guess that for a first two caharaywr is not so bad but you have to put something interesting on the world of the mc and not being a normie character at least make him more attractive to the view like golden eyes black hair , blow , red something like that maybe blue but it feels to simple

Dude at least drop the last chapter that you have the delete one and well is your decision good luck and God Bless you

i have the same question too

Muy bueno la verdad gracias muy op al Incio y la verdad algo trillado de la sangre de superman y la verdad los nanomachines son muy útiles más de lo que se plantea buen novel sigue así

Sigue esta bueno aunque deberías de agregar algo con chi siento yo como de algún manwha o algo que cambie de raza como una plantilla de nero o dante o la del dante angel/demonio o master chif no estaría mal.

Thanks for the chapter and for the another op character maybe baki o Daniel park , Yu the boxeer ,ohma from kengan or maybe Shiryu of OPM or garou Cpulbe a cool MTF or maybe any version Richard Dragon or his Pupil but I guess is to much dc maybe you sould change batman as some one like the cap america.

Whitout family I dont understand how can you be relatives with all ready characters is to much.

I guess they'll be be only on patreon but i doesn't have a update since may. so ABANDONED???🤨

Well its look like this is another one that will never continue, ibwonder how this site and fanfiction is still going on , i wish there is a ia that can write something cause chat gpt is not good for that.