Lizenee

MORE!

WHERE ARE THE OTHER CHAPTERS!

YAAAY! Poor Alicia, but....THE HELLISH TRAINING IS BACK!

Everything is ok, but I didn't like the relationships. An there's the side story, I don't like it either. as I said at the begining, th rest is pretty much ok.

When the author said “Sweet hell” I say... DREAM WORLD!

Thank you! But I’d like questions. The bext chapter will actually answers for those questions.

Thanks! I'd be really happy if people like you commented.But...Ok! Thak you. (not really much to say, heh)

My friends always plays UNO with me, and...We actually become BETTER friends with each other...But we also have special rules for mean or bad people, that makes them hate us! (on purpose) I bet the people who play with us are BONEly, right?

Nice! I also thought that! Really, it isn't frisk whithout determination right? left? heh.

I agree with one of the comments. There is both temmie and The Annoying dog, soooo...Shouldn't Akane have a cute white dog? a striped shirt wearing cat? I dunno.