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The only problemi find with all of it is that it's over!!! 😢 😉
Amazing turn of events. Realty like the culmination of the internal struggle Nicely done!
Nice little chapter I agree
Honestly, the story is amazingly imaginative, the speed and eloquence with which you tell it is really incredible. I think it deserves to be premium. Congrats
Nice chapter. Like the revea Even if short lived My only comment would be thay I think she shouldve seen his tear. 😢
Not to defeat??
I don’t you need this warning honestly. I would keep comments out
Just to be clear... it’s only point if confusion in an other wise epic battle telling :)
Like that he’s come back around to leverage his relationships!!