ScrambledEgg

Isn't the SP fluctuate too much? The last time he fought Black Cat Crew, he got a lot of SP from his new combine attacks, the gum gum bara pistol alone gives him 400 Sp, but now he only have 400 SP. How? After that battle he never copy or synthesis any skill, from more than 1200 Sp down to 400 sp, how can his Sp disappear like that

Not bad, but too much info dump. It's like reading some wikipedia or fandom. The info dump just too long and have nothing to do with the main plot. From ch 2 to 5 or 6, almost 80% of the ch just some description. After that, instead starting with To Love Ru plot, author write about Bento war. The actual plot started at ch 10 or 11. So if someone wants to avoid the info dump, just read ch 1, skimming through until ch 10, the start reading normally at ch 11.

Well, i read some advanced ch, when he got electric badge from Vermillion gym he got nothing. The achievement from the system more strict than the usual ff, maybe he will only got one lottery when he got All kanto gym (8 badge) not for each gym.

The elctric gym leader of Paldea, i forgot her name.

Yes, only 1 heroine

It's ok, keep your good works, this ff is pretty good compared to other pokemon ff

There are some mistranslation, especially for city name and some item. Like the inheritance, in the start they're from Yugioh God Card, now they become Legendary Bird, Slifer become Rayquaza and Ra become Moltres. Rayquaza isn't Legendary Bird Lol

it's been a while since i read this story, but i remember he gives peter and gwen some modified henshin prop, i think he gives peter Spider Vistamp from KR Revice

Any raw link or the Chinese title?

Cerulean really a useless gym. Even tho mc got their badge, but the system just ignored it, mc got nothing from the system, not even a draw for lottery