Dao_of_Cheese
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2020-10-15 加入United States
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Dao_of_Cheesea month ago發表It would be cool to have a mage in a martial world
- Dao_of_Cheesea month ago發表
The story is great, but it lack fluidity in a sense. It’s more of a sitcom-ish feel with how much time passes between chapters. We don’t really bond with the Main Character, ie struggles, success, and mediocrity. It gets better during the latter half of the story but it feels like a different person to who we we’re introduced.
該書已被刪除。 - Dao_of_Cheese2 months ago發表
I really love musical skills
該書已被刪除。 - Dao_of_Cheese2 months ago回復 Haughty_master
i no comprehend much of talk you😭😭
