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How many sunglasses does he have on him?

You can't just leave important things in the creators' thoughts, man. Now I wonder how many other pieces of story I missed in them.

What.

Oh no.

He’s going to die, isn’t he.

I have no idea where you can find editors, since I don't have one. I just check the chapters for spelling mistakes myself.

I'm not gonna spoil anything and I'll just say: soon :)

Remember this is Jacks view of the events. There may have been something else going on behind the scenes that he didn't know about.

Whether that's possible or not will be revealed in of the next chapters, so look forward to it.

A little bit, yes. Although for everything that's similar between this story and that one there's gonna be twice as many differences, so don't worry about this just being a copy.