Akhilles

Thanks for the review PSE666!

True enough. But this is about how the Gods manipulate people. I want to bring this information out in the open. Make it official. Because the real test is about to begin.

Thank you for your kind words!

I love how the story dives into the plot without wasting time. You have just enough information about each character before you are give the first twist. This is a simple story. But I think its simplicity works. You really don't need a lot of complexity in this one, since its main focus is on the characters and their drama. Keep up the good work and looking forward to future updates.

Thank you for the feedback! It means a lot :)

I want you to succeed on this one, so all the best to you. I think you should try to focus on one character's point of view. But I love the fact that you are going with the mature theme. Great work :)

I think the story has great potential. Try to keep the focus on one character so that it does not skip between many points of view. Otherwise, keep up the good work!