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Honestly, shortening it but keeping the same length would make it feel less dragging considering the update time so yea i think that would be great.

omg thank you so much, I have been looking forward to the updates!!!!

Happy birthday author and tftc!!

Omfg im so happy, he has both types of vulpix. I have never seen a fic do this yet and im so excited for the final team

Hmm a few thoughts so far. I really like the story the premise is unique and not boring but i feel like the way these recent chapters were paced/structured could use some work. For example this main villain starhunt in the recent fight, the build up leading to the tournament was really well done and we were hyped for the eventual fight but the tournamet itself feels rushed, without substance and the final fight itself was lack luster. Starhunt felt like a canon fodder character like all the hype built around him ended with me disappointed. Most of the fights were vague and could be built with more detail to bring tension and excitement but it felt like the character was just going through the motions and it didnt matter much. The strategic depth was not showcased properly, since it is clear the mc is strategy focused and the shrugging off of the level differences feels like the levels are useless since mc is going to win. Make the fight feel harder so that the win feels fulfilling not hollow. Now relating to the two friends the way they just were sent on missions immediateky after the tournament without any development or explanation feels like a missed opportunity for more detailed world building in his "effort to build connections" because he already has good skills and now just needs time and resources. Tldr: like the story idea and plot so far, but feel like fight scenes and worldbuilding could use improvement also feel like all the buildup of starhunt led to nothing and was disappointed with him

He better pick shiny beldum ot else imma throw hands, shiny milotic + shiny metagross he is definitely their secret love child 100% you cannot change my mind.

When i read the synopsis, i expected an apprentiship not a wallace look alike who is basically adopted by the stones THIS IS MUCH BETTER.

I love this so much, he is literally the love child of wallace and steven HAHAHAHAHAHA.

Omg when you said slow burn, i thought years NOT 2 MONTHS im excited now Ahahahahaha

Omg is this back for good? Because if it is, i will reread the story but i don't wanna waste my time if it will not continue