Bark_in_the_Dark

If you know something about living beings, it is their adaptability, feeling pain for so long, sooner or later they will get used to that pain, leaving them as an empty shell. The closest thing to how the character should be, would be like ophis, someone "empty" with no "future" goal, someone almost emotionless. PS: if you try to tell me that ophis and the rest of the gods are "older", canonically the gods are around 10,000 years old in dxd. so ophis must be around that age, and great red should be much younger. like 8,000 years or something like that. Lucifer's war occurs at 5,000 years and the civil war of the demons at 8,000.

If you know something about living beings, it is their adaptability, feeling pain for so long, sooner or later they will get used to that pain, leaving them as an empty shell. The closest thing to how the character should be, would be like ophis, someone "empty" with no "future" goal, someone almost emotionless. PS: if you try to tell me that ophis and the rest of the gods are "older", canonically the gods are around 10,000 years old in dxd. so ophis must be around that age, and great red should be much younger. like 8,000 years or something like that. Lucifer's war occurs at 5,000 years and the civil war of the demons at 8,000.

this really sucks. many pointless time jumps, relationships that come out of nowhere, the mc doing actions without any sense. (apparently out of nowhere the mc has 40% shares in most large companies) but he likes to live like a normal person ... It's in the fucking world of fate, but it's not even explained correctly. The author adding characters and relationships out of thin air. One example is bochi, another D , hoshino Ai... and the list goes on and on. The "system" is a poorly made and planned crap. Seriously if you are going to do something, even plan it well

why not? even B and C dosnt love in a romantic way, B and C can make a strong bond. they can care for each other, protect each other and love each other in a non-romantic way and more like a family closer than blood family and after all in a certain way they would be united through marriage or relationship. although B and C do not love each other if they have a union and if they could love each other only not in a platonic way, and more like a mother loves her son.

The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the events, it feels as if the author will lack motivation or originality, all the things that the author adds are in the 99% of the other high school dxd ff.

People hate Alice because Zeel lives her threatening to kill her if she gets in the way but he never does anything to her and in this chapter Zeel feels despair but Alice who is always reviewing what he feels Zeel gets in the way knowing that he is feeling for the first time despair, even knowing that he is stronger and smarter than she feels despair, why does the shit get in the way? It is as if she wants to see him dead. if he does not punish her or do something to her, take out all the chapters the times when she feels threatened by him and the times when you write that he would kill her if she gets in the way of him