Ali_Bayaty

I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style. While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book. "Isaac likes to sing. he enjoys it. Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't. Alice likes her elder brother." Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story. The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences

this..somehow doesn't feel like a vrmmo anymore

author-san is doing such a great job so far, I'm a late reader but.. keep it up!

my thoughts exactly. would be better if author changes the name to something like "double/two swords mastery"

I feel like half the comments don't read the chapters .. why do y'all keep asking the same question over and over again when the author clearly explained it multiple times???

Good story so far, but I've noticed that from the first chapter the amount of mistakes in using "to" and "too" as well as "there" and "their" is quite a lot. Its really annoying to read and breaks the flow, hope you get an editer or fix before uploading

So good so far author! Keep it up

Good stuff so far author!

'ITS ALIIIIIVVEEE'

There are so many typos in this chapter, there usually are one or two but this one is straight up filled. Please fix