yinumlia

hi! sorry for that, been really busy recently 😅 anyway, im glad you like the story! I'll do my best to update as much as I can <3

Really love how the story progresses. Not a big fan of transmigration theme, but this one definitely gave it some spice. The world background is well-designed and easily understood, and characters are uniquely described. It does not rely on the generic elements of transmigration and I commend the author for that.Also, the cover is absolutely captivating!

I will keep that in mind and try to fix it. Thank you so much for the review!

Very much appreciated, I will do my best to keep this going. Thank you so much!

A great and worthwhile read! I added this to my library and hopes for more. I am no professional writer myself but in comparison to those books written by known authors, I can say this one is almost on the same level as those. The construction of words for narration and dialogues are very creative, making them easy to comprehend and entertaining to read at the same time. Action scenes were executed well through writing too. The world background was built and explained thoroughly, I see no flaw with that so far. I am loving the MC as much as I love her story, her attitude and everything. After all the encounters she had on her new life, her ultimate dream still stands firm on her heart. This novel is great, all about it is, I am looking forward to the progress and development of the plot. Keep it up!

Thank you so much! I'll do my best to keep this up :D

The story is truly touching and quite relatable, being awaken from a fake utopia is my type of plot after all. Although I've seen lots of stories of this theme, this one's unique in its own way. The characters are portrayed to be realistic, as well as their actions but reading it is very entertaining. So, the writing quality is well and decent but I believe there are still room for improvement (purely from a reader's pov, I'm not a professional writer either). I suggest you add more descriptions to the dialogues or describe the current scenario in a more detailed manner, to aid with the reader's visualization. There were some grammatical errors but that's totally fine and does not get in the way of understanding the story (I myself commit that most of the time lmao but too lazy to check them), proof reading is the key, YAS. All in all, the slice of life genre was given justice to and that's a big thumbs up! The story development is good and I am looking forward to how it will progress further. Keep it up!

Such a unique and amazing concept for a plot. Each character's background stories are well-written and you can clearly see their different outlooks in life. The elements of drama, fantasy and comedy combines in a very neat and entertaining manner, a good point to note. There are just some technical errors but they do not get in the way of comprehension. The narration and dialogues are also decently written. Love the characters' and story's development, I highly recommend this one. Will be looking forward to how the story will progressively further. Keep up the good work!

Oh myy thank you so much for the kind words!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my story, I'll give my best to keep it going. You too, best of luck on your writing journey!