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I just have a small request, can you add capital letters to the first name please. 👍🏽

(mc) orochimaru, at the beginning of the story acts OK, it was interesting to see what development there will be, but the more the story progresses the more it annoys and disgusts me. First he joins Danzo and starts with all these stupid experiments on humans, he becomes more and more without morals and acts like a psychopath in need... he does pretty much what orochimaru did in the original story but earlier (not everything). Oh.. and he flirts from time to time with Tsunade. Anyway, I'm not interested in continuing this story from what I understood, if you have different points of view and want to share them I'm ok with that, maybe I'll start reading it again.

I don't think it's what you mean, in the first chap he says "This Fan Fiction Novel of Youzitsu", and i didn't see any ad of a certain patreon page (at least in the firsts chapters, i didn't check the others yet ).

Thanks, now i understand

Dude don't make fun with God

your mc is disturbed dude, i won't continue that 😐😑👋

I can't say that it's a great novel, in the way of writing and what is written, but as the Lord taught me, "take one step at a time".....................

When he's not with gon's team, Mc looks like a psychopathe, i can't understand why

Serious?? You let this pass?

Prends ton temps, que Dieu te bénisse