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About your rant my only problem was kessica losing her memory nothing else about your story

You could have made it so that jessica wanted to breakup after the incident rather than forgetting about him

The novel is too slow paced for my liking and the characters are not that great the mc is too passive

The MC gathered 100 troops last chapter but it only says 20 troops here

It is were not we’re in the second line of this paragraph

who is the kid that was bullied? Is that the mc or someone else? If he is mc who is william Hunter?

YOU COPIED THIS NOVEL COPYCAT http://wbnv.in/a/cchNBNu

Bro where is the weekly update of the Marvel novel???

Bro I dont understand anything in this chapter good luck in the future ones

So dont worry about Votes and views bro those people that like your story are still reading this even if we dont check this every day:)