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I understand, but even though you are not a writer, a second perspective is still unbelievably valuable

Thanks man, you are a big help. I’ll try improve the chapters with your advice. I’ll also consider doing a short novel.

I do have something for you though, could you please click on my profile and try to find my other novel under the name “Child of the Seas” I uploaded a couple stockpiled chapters I have for it as I was hoping you could check it out, see if it’s acceptable? (It’s in the same Universe and same world as this novel)

Hello again Deuteros, nice to have you back. I don’t think I’ll be continuing the novel for a good bit longer

That’s odd

Hi! Sorry, working through some irl stuff but will continue at a steady schedule ASAP! If I had to guess, February will be when both of my novels begin. (Maybe January for the other one, we'll see.) Thanks for your patience

peut-être une erreur de traduction, il est écrit calvitie. ce qui veut dire qu'il perd ses cheveux mais qu'il n'est pas encore chauve.

I had spare coins

Thank you sooooo much <3