Lucky_Dayeous

seems like a lot of info for the start. h

too much distractions. need to concentrate on flow

it's ok for switch off reading. hope for the best

need more than simple explanations sometimes to know understand

it's seems too slow pace and it doesn't look so promising.

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it's exciting bad story but it's too slow n repetitive. it's better to move on slightly faster.

it's exciting but takes too long to get to point. might be better to shorten n not repeat

it seems similar to another story I have read

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