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North Korea is nothing like the Scandinavian countries. I don't think you can compare socialism with them.
I'm in the learning phase, so I highly appreciate every piece of criticism my story gets.
Noted. Thanks for the comments, i will sit down to change and edit the story at one point, and your comments are very helpful. Thanks 😊
yes, vit and int determines how much you have, not levels
Not sure what you mean?
Should be said that the deadlock wasn't meant to be going on for minutes and only a few seconds. He go out of it since he could feel him losing the fight. Could have been explained better, and thanks I will take notes of every comment and improve the story :)
I have compressed the different windows so not to have it fill everything. And when he looked at the skill before, it was the skills detail window, its where the info of the skill is.
The story got more developed as i wrote it, and this is one of the things i changed. My story will get an major update when i have enough material, but as it is now small errors will persists through the story.
its not romance tagged so don't expect it
Let's get the big one out of the way first, the grammar is not the best. You are a new writer and English isn't your first language so you cant be blamed. The story and its characters are interesting and you are good at world-building, keep up the good work :)