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No worries, man. I'll try my best not to disappoint with the gift from this world lol.
Because we're not worth it, honestly. There's easier prey out there. Plus, the amount of times animals who attack humans and end up with some sort of hunting party being made to kill them...well, it's natural selection. Animals that kill humans don't last long, so whatever there is in their genetics that made them attack humans in the first place was never able to be passed down. Do this for a few tens of thousands of years and animals just decide fucking with humans isn't worth it.
Monke is the end of evolution. They are perfect.
Can't be around her all the time lol. They both have their own independence despite being in some sort of proto-relationship.
Well, that's not his gift in the Twilight sense. It's the cheat he got off of some ROB that sent him to the Twilight universe. The gift he's developing hasn't been shown yet. And by gift I mean something like Edward's telepathy, Alice's precognition or Bella's shield. So, like you said, he's the most perfectly evolved human but with the twist that it's IF humans grew up on a harsher planet and used their brawn as well as their brains.
Sorry, I must've gotten it mixed up in my head. Thanks for correcting me :)
People who fall under the Specialization category can't use the Enhancement category. More accurately, they have 0% talent and/or efficiency in using it.
Use fullstops/periods. Split this massive wall of text into paragraphs. It's incredibly hard to read when it's like this.
Thanks for the chapter. I'm enjoying the book more and more as the chapters progress. I'm surprised you've made 'Harry Potter' so interesting despite my general dislike for Mages/Magicians. I guess I'm looking forward to the MC being a mixed fighter of Magical and Physical. Your ability as a writer is no doubt helping as well! So keep up the good work!
There's literally only one other Twilight fanfic I'm aware of that goes with Rosalie. That's not over used at all lol.