Plug_O_Stien

This is a novel with average potential wasted on a talentless author. The characters fall flat, the story stagnates and the world just feels small, like it revolves solely around the gravity of the main character's narrative. It's not all bad, the sole thing that sustained this novel through the bulk of the mindless and repetitive crap was the hilarious inclusion of the dancing genjutsu. It is the best thing in this novel hands down and always got a good laugh out of me. But... that's as far as it goes. There are plot holes throughout this story concerning his power, his unwillingness to use it, and his personality completely killing off any interesting plot. There are so many opportunities for him to have meaningful connections, and experience loss and joy, and instead the author pathetically turtles, cowering behind the character's lazy and irrational fears to keep the plot the same. It grinds my gears to encounter writers with such little love for their works, it's beyond disheartening and more than a little pathetic. Over all, I think there is so much here for an interesting story, and I have seen the opportunity to make this amazing. Unfortunately, it has been wasted. Read this if you want to pass the time, but it is not something that can be rated about average (3 stars). It is underserving of more on account of the Author.

I just checked, it counts hours spent reading on app only. Not on google which I use.

For some reason it doesn't update. I don't know why, I'm on this sight daily.

Over all an objectively BAD story. Writing quality is below average with poor prose and terrible structure. Update stability is spotty and not consistent. Story development takes a nose dive post chapter 15. And Brandon letting omni-man get away is so forced I couldn't keep reading. Your story is an insult to superman's power level, and your execution is for shit. Character design is also awful. No clear motivation for why he wants to become a hero except a ridiculous "feeling" he has when he thinks about it. Don't make me laugh you clown. World background is non existent and relies entirely on the readers knowledge of the plot and world. Nor is it expanded upon at all in 25 fucking chapters. Over all an insulting interpretation of superman's powers in this world, and a plot slave too scared to change anything worth a damn.

Honestly a great read. Overall translation quality is good, stroy development is good, character design is good though it does sometimes strain my suspense of disbelief. He is a tad too knowledgeable about everything, but conveyed in a way that makes it digestible for the most part. I'm just pissed the chapters are blocked considering it's a translation. Fucking hate that.

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So I read all the available chapters and it was a promising read. So, writing quality is 3 stars: average prose, readable but nothing astonishing. Update stability is not consistent so I gave it 1 stars. Story development 2 stars: it was frustratingly disappointing as it passed the 30 chapter mark. I skipped entire sections of chapters and outright skipped entire ones, totally unable to give a single shit about what was going on. His inability to grasp RCT is understandable at first, but having the sharingan and more than 2 decades worth of experience with chakra control should have let him master it by the events of Geto's little rebellion. The fact that the author had the temerity to nerf itachi during his second encounter with toji is honestly the deal breaker for me. It's frankly pathetic and ridiculous to even try and write that itachi would put off getting his eyes (HIS MAIN FUCKING WEAPON) healed before the events that unfolded. He put it off for "weeks" apparently. Itachi did, huh? A prodigious ninja, who valued his eyes tremendously, suddenly forgot something so crucial. Fuck. Off. Toji should be dead within a minute of their encounter, no contest. Now, moving on from the dumpster fire that the story became, the character design was rather good, 4 stars: the author did manage to capture itachi's personality during the first 20 chapters or so before deviating into a shell--a mockery--of what he was. I gave it 4 star what what it was, not what it became, in contrast to story development that specifically talks about how the story progressed. Finally world background is 2 stars: below average with zero expansion on what was covered, nothing new was added, and what related to his sharingan was poorly explained and glossed over. In the end, great potential and start, ruined by the author's obsessive need to drag out the plot. For all the changes itachi's appearance supposedly caused in the story, everything stays the fucking same.

The writing quality at the start was very good for this site, though it did drop off slightly the more I read on. Not deplorable by any stretch, but it was noticeable. Furthermore, the author tries too hard to highlight the mc's scheming and calculative nature, constantly reinforcing it every other sentence. It became apparent that his vocabulary was limited, with repeated use of the same words to describe a thought process, an expression or an action. It became an eye roll after a while, reading about him "plotting and planning" every paragraph. There's a common phrase, "show, don't tell." Heard of it? Otherwise, mostly an average fic, nothing overtly impressive about it. I do hate the he's constantly adamant about keeping one for all under wraps, constantly cowering about its potential discovery, prefering to under all circumstances stay subtle with its use to avoid making a connection between him and all might. Something almost no one thought about in canon, which is even more evident considering Midorya's liberal use and catch phrases, and was easily explain away. Furthermore, there hasn't been a recorded case of a transferable quirk other than one for all, his fear is not only illogical but becomes a flaw in his supposedly intelligent character. So this is worth reading guess, but not outstanding.

Incredibly bland. That is how I would summarise this story. Mind numbing start with a lifeless mc who, I admit, does get a bit more tolerable over the course of the story, yet simply feels like a more mature, not stupid yuji. There is no individuality to him at all. The power progression is good, if put in a vacuum. Give it context and the battles are TERRIBLE. Excessively drawn out so as to keep cannon the same. He doesn't learn from his mistakes, yaps constantly, no sense of urgency when he should know better, doesn't capitalise on opportunities, and then complains when shit doesn't go his way. No planning before the shibuya incident at all that could circumvent 90% of the problems he encountered. Would background is not expanded on at all, and the world feels incredibly small. The writing quality is average, nothing much to say there. I found myself skipping the next three chapters the moment kinjaku appeared (during yuji and mahito fight), it was so forced that I couldn't bear to read it. So overall, a bit below average in terms of plot (however little there is lol) with acceptable writing quality and a lacklustre mc who doesn't seem to impact the story at all even with his tremendous boost in power compared to Canon yuji. Very disappointing, but expected.

This is just bad writing. Constantly prolonging the fight like a fucking amateur. Gutter trash.