Corey_Evans_0719

it's caseoh ahahahaa

wtf why make us pay again

the problem is you'll likely lose a lot of readers before you can get to that point because your MC lacks substance

are we even sure Aidan is the MC at this point? the story so far has basically had nothing to do with him

I'm sorry but 12 chapters on these side character is crazy to me you've spent basically the whole book so far working on everything but the MC the only things we really know about him is he is a genius, has a system and is pretty

9 out of 10* I hope you mean

blamed* past couple chapters have been rough grammatically

should be bear skin

is there a reason to put out his buff totem when everyone is already permanently having the buff from it? unless it attacks with itself?

why even put this in there if you aren't going to put the attributes