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This story is really good in my opinion, The story is kind of slow in the beginning but after the 2-year time skip after chap 50 the mc develops in his character and also his strength the problems I have is that a few characters designs are kind of lacking with some characters that seem to be important for the future plot, And also the World building is kind of nice so far but currently since the story is just starting is can be improved upon

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No I’m remaking this novel with the same premise but just changing things

Ok so I decided to completely restart this novel to put it simply I felt that the main character was a bit bland and the story was just kinda cliche and rushed especially in the last few chapters so probably in a few weeks I will release the new novel that’s all thnaks for reading

Girlfriend?

Yeah just made it up had to something unique

Sorry it took me a while to upload this chapter this week is my birthday week and I had to do some planning and other stuff so this week was a packed week.

If you want a new way for Kai to use his Hydrokinesis skill tell me in the comments and I may add it in his arsenal

Working on the new chapter