Destiny_Demented

Yes huhu 🤭🤭🤭

Excuse me, I'm just going to keep simping. Wording, perfect. Portrayal, perfect. Emotions, perfect. Falling into the water, perfect. Waking up in desolation, perfect. I like how she isn't just flailing about in the water and has a valid reason for drowning.

Chapter two. Excellent. An absolute JOY to read. From the descriptions, to the visuals, It draws the reader into the spiral of events. There's *nothing* better for a reader, than a writer who knows to keep their attention with their wording. Thank you, Captain, for this brilliant work of artistic pensmanship

I love the basic relatable dynamic of the MC. She's just a normal kid with real-life problems. But I have to hand it to the family dynamic. Despite being from a well-bred family, there's no angst and darkness, instead we have a sweet and caring family, who wouldn't trade her for the world. It's an adorable setting and I would *die* for each one of them.

If I were to be faced with a blade, twould be hot ngl. SHSJJSSJ, Jokes aside. GIRL'S IN A SOUP OH NO

THE PIN HATH ARRIVED. BEWAREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

*bonks the river* How dare you not like her, rude river!

*Throws glitter* Can I just say that your choice of words brings the story to life in such a way, that it's not just Yoon-Yi enjoying the festival, the reader is pulled in as well ? It's perfection.

TwT As a fashion freak, I cannot fathom how gorgeous that looks............... Yoon-Yi gonna look like the queen she is in thattt

AHAHAHAHAHAHA XD The height of loving history. Calculating the experience and age by wars. Girl, you on fire.