Carmen_Quiles

Overall a very good read. The pacing is consistent, with excellent character development and thoughtful world building. The inclusion of multiple p.o.v.s is a nice touch.

Well written. A little wordy at times, but overall a good read. I rarely find a story that can hold my attention for an extended amount of time without me having to put it down for a while.

I'm just as confused as you are.

thnx for the likes

letting us see the character develop and grow stronger is actually pretty good I like the fact that he's growing and exploring all of his possibilities I guess

a new twist on an old trope. at least the the mc doesn't start off being over powered. seems like he's going to be a unifying character or a rallying point for the rest... we'll see

right from the start your pulled into the story. the mc is interesting and the mystery of why comes into play. the background is rich and the secondary characters pretty good too. only downside is some of the descriptions are a bit confusing and the grammar needs some work

love the complexity of the story.

props to the MC.

i like that the story has a logical progression, but some of the devices are a bit overwhelming.