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Thank you for the honest review! I will surely rewrite some of my chapters once I have a time :)

I forgot to include my review! The story was great, character was well develope and the world was very interesting. I only have some issue about how the story unfold which is sometimes a little bit predictable so I hope you will include some surprising moments in your future chapters, also more exploration pleeaseee. It was a great book made by the author, you can really sense the efforts given by the author when writing this book

It was an amazing book with amazing characters and good story development. Great writing and also Great story plot, im just hoping to experience more surprising moments because of your story and genre, sometimes the story was getting a little bit predictive thats. But overall, it was a great , intriguing and interesting book with a bunch of good and relatable characters

Fantasy genre is my favorite in terms of books and movies, which means I have a high standard on reviewing this kind of stories. The story was very well thought of, the characters was well developed but still need some time in order to make the readers care for them, while the world which is the most important part of fantasy genre books and movies is kinda lacking. Yes theres some parts where you are able to tell us what it was but i suggest to make it more alive, let the characters spend more time with the world and try exploring it. Overall this was a great book! Good job for the author

The story development, Is good and the character development was good too. Its too early to expect for surprises thats why I cant review it deeper.. it was a bery interesting book, and for this kinds of story im expecting some major twist that isnt too predictable okie. Overall keep up the great work. Ill be putting this on my library

The story is intruiging and Interesting. Yes the characyer development is good same as the grammar, but the story is pretty predictable. I hope you can give some unexpected moments specially some twist that will change the faith of the characters drastically, so that they can feel more humane. But overall it was an amazing work! Good job writer...

The only complain I could give was the lack of world exploring. But overall it was a good story for sports lovers, good story arc, good writing, good character development.

Thank you for an honest reply, I will surely change that on my future chapters. After finishing my book, I'll be rewriting my previous chapters so that I can change that, thank you :)

Very interesting story, character and world. But I hope you can make it feel more alive by making the characters explore the world while giving them enough parts to develop in order for the readers to feel them...

This book was amazing, I can see the effort that the author gave in order to write every chapter. The way how you develop the characters was excellent, as a fellow writer I learned a lot on how to develop a character well. For the story it was interesting but a little predictable. Im expecting a much more intriguing story line in your future chapters