Half_Boiled_Man

This story is genuinely good. Characters are engaging and interesting. While the theme may come off as overused. Its pulled off in a unique way. The different point of views provided give you a really good understanding of the story. All in all, props to tge author good job.

While its still early I'm quite liking the story so far. The main character while not the kindest person is still likeable. And the world building is pretty good. The system of how the world works isn't confusing at all which adds to the entretainment of it. Quite excited to see how this will turn out.

The many points of view get dizzy at times, but so far so good. The characters are entretaining. Must say props to you so far.

This a lightning fast, engaging action piece of a novel. While the writing is at times clumsy. With its grammar misha** and far too wordy lines. It's fun to read regardless. Characters are interesting despite how fast the story around them moves. Which in turn leads to not losing anytime with the storytelling. Props to the author writing this, will keep reading for sure.

A bit too wordy, regardless, fun fast paced story. Quite enjoying the naruto and DB references. Will keep reading, hope it gets better.

will fix, thanks for the tid bit

Thank you, I really appreciate your kind words.

Wow, this is really good as of now. But this kid Alex, I unironically want to hit him. Regardless its super good so far.

yes but not that hard core of a fan

The writing isn't too wordy so its easy to follow. The characters are well designed. From there clueless approach to a new world. To the growth they gain through constant interaction with the world. And the over all world is described in a simple fashion. Which leaves room for it to grow through the characters. All in all real good story I recommend to anyone looking for something interesting.